@plebpoet called me out in my bounty so I got to work 🫡 #1209798

My reviews of @plebpoet [FM] stories

#1091392 389 words The end of an age the beginning of another I definitely like the shock factor in the beginning to grab my attention! I like my picture of the character filling in as I keep reading. At first picturing a pre-teen, young adult, then grown woman The switch to the AI was a big twist! The story is better on re-read, realizing her mind was like its own AI exploring what her body can do, smash things etc, and now she’s ditched the body for the empty box!

#1074164 [FM] ✨ What if there was a new myth to believe in? ✨ (849 words) 849 words What if there was a new myth to believe in? Was the story implying that AI had written this new myth and it was amazing? Or like the new student used AI to help write the myth and it was incredible? If AI didn’t write the story than it’s mention of the mention of machine threw me off a bit. I am happy that the professors did decide to like the student’s work rather than be afraid of it tho! Was this short story itself the myth they were referring to?

#1082626 [FM] VR boys (1118 words) #1082626 1118 words VR Boys First comment! I like the “expletive!” Shout haha The stream of shit in-game caught me by surprise I was also surprised that the game starts as Patrick and Jessie, but then it switches to Kirk and Tim IRL Reading your three stories in a row is interesting too going from female protagonists to male. Exploring the mind. Sasha was about exploring herself, her body, her personality. These guys literally have no soul cartridge? And of course here too it’s about the dancer and her body dancing alone it all being lonely They’re so driven for this gold if they “win” that they don’t know what they’d do with it. Some big entity is supplying them beer? The goal of the short story to me is to want to keep reading, or make you ask questions. VR Boys seems to accomplish that for me. I liked it! FIRST COMMENT! See I support my fellow writers 🫡