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I used to make a living as a professional sales page copywriter...
So...
I decided to use my skills to make an "effortless orange-pilling machine"...
This is a one-of-a-kind product capable of converting normies in one brief 25 minute sitting.
I am looking for feedback, and my reward budget is 50K sats...
Provide useful feedback, and you will be rewarded...
Feedback is appreciated on both:
  1. The sales page that sells the "orange pilling machine": https://bitcoinmaxinews.com/stack-free-sats-for-life/
  2. The "orange pilling machine" itself: https://bitcoinmaxinews.com/bitcoin-rabbit-hole/
The good news is that people now have an URL to send anyone they want to orange-pill...
Everything is explained in 1), so I suggest you start there...
Looking forward to hear what you have to say (good, bad, or ugly)!
  1. All those titles with yellow highlight and big pictures, shows like those scam sites with "work from home and earn a fortune as a mom".... Are screaming literally SCAM
  2. There's no such thing as "golden ticket" to "orangepill" in x minutes. That's a stupid myth. Don't go on that path. I am talking from my own experience for the last 10+ years onboarding normies into bitcoin.
  3. DO NOT "SALE" Bitcoin to normies, that's a total wrong approach. Bitcoin is not something you have to sale, is something you have to learn, you learn how to free yourself from fiat slavery, not to get rich in fiat.
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110 sats \ 1 reply \ @ek 15 Feb 2023
Yes and all this talk about urgency and FOMO also makes this look really sketchy. Same stuff a scammer works with.
I don't want anyone FOMOing into bitcoin. They will most likely just burn themselves and blame bitcoin lol
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Do scammers work with FOMO? Really?
FOMO happens every bull-market. Does that make Bitcoin a scam because people FOMO in at the top each time and get burned?
These are proven "sales tactics" that in the case of Bitcoin just happens to be true...
Bitcoin HAS absolute scarcity, which nothing else monetized does. Bitcoin IS a once in a civilization early bird opportunity that will not last forever... The list goes on...
Bitcoin is literally any salesperson's dream sales object, and this rabbit hole just captures and highlights all that for newbies to get an overview...
A headline that says "Buy Bitcoin or HFSP" with a wall of text underneath is hardly gonna convert anyone... :)
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Any orange pilling attempt is a "sales process"... there is no way around that.
All "one-sitting" sales pages look "scammy", because that's the only way to grab and keep cold to lukewarm people's attention, and keep it long enough to convert them...
This is a tool for "instant" get-off-zero conversions...
They are incentivized to learn more once they're in (plenty of sub rabbit holes to explore on the page)...
Yes, and they learn enough from that page to make a decision in one sitting.
They get an overview of the whole "elephant", so to speak, instead of just the tail, trunk, or toenail...
May I ask if you actually took the time to read the whole thing? Cause it doesn't sound like it to me...
Thanks for the feedback though, and for fun I quote AI:
"AI, why do scammy looking sales page convert?"
AI:
Scammy looking sales pages can convert because they often employ persuasive tactics, such as fear of missing out (FOMO), urgency, limited-time offers, and perceived scarcity.
These tactics can be effective in motivating people to make a purchase. Additionally, some people may be more trusting of a sales page that looks amateurish or less polished, as it can appear more authentic and less “salesy”.
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A bit more from AI:
Would a sales page for Bitcoin be a good idea?
Yes, a sales page for Bitcoin could be a good idea. Bitcoin has become increasingly popular in recent years and many people are interested in buying it. A sales page could be used to educate potential buyers on the advantages of owning Bitcoin, as well as provide a platform for them to purchase it. Additionally, a sales page could be used to promote any promotions or discounts related to buying Bitcoin.
Even if it "looks" scammy with FOMO, yellow highlighted text etc?
Yes, even if a sales page for Bitcoin looks scammy with FOMO, yellow highlighted text, etc., it could still be a good idea. As mentioned above, these persuasive tactics can be effective in motivating people to make a purchase. It is important, however, to make sure that the sales page is in compliance with any laws and regulations regarding financial transactions and cryptocurrency. The content should also be clear and accurate in order to avoid any potential legal issues.
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to me, the site was an instant turn off.
No nice design looks scammy weird structure ...
i gave up after 2 min
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You are probably already a bitcoiner, no?
This page is designed for cold/lukewarm and clueless nocoiners...
All sales pages looks "scammy" lol.
There is no other way to grab and keep their attention long enough for them to be converted, and get off zero..
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I don't understand the sales angle to Bitcoin. You don't need to force Bitcoin down anyone's throat. Literally nothing good comes from that
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Not forcing the orange-pill at all. I am literally just telling the truth and giving them a full overview big picture.
A headline and a wall of text will never be read by cold/lukewarm newbies... Just because it looks "scammy" doesn't make it a scam...
The idea is to have a URL to send newbies, instead of endlessly arguing.
Just say; take 25 minutes to read this, and we can talk...
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sigh, salesmen are the last thing we need. salesmen are only good for getting people into things they don't actually understand, only to end up irate and turned off to the whole thing.
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I disagree. Salesmanship like this is the only way to get cold to lukewarm newbies off zero...
There's a reason sales pages look like this, it works...
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the reason sales pages look like that is to attract idiots to take advantage of. lots of bold colored type, plenty of pics and no real information.
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So, your take is that https://bitcoinmaxinews.com/bitcoin-rabbit-hole/ does not contain any substance or "real information" about Bitcoin?
Are you a sales page copywriter, sir? An expert on the subject matter?
Have you ever sold anything online?
Let me ask you this: How would you make a page designed to convert clueless newbies in one brief sitting? Just a headline and a wall of text, or how?
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certainly not a salesman of any kind. worked tech support for most of my youth, sales are the people that trick customers into buying things they don't need or understand.
as for "converting" someone in "one brief sitting":
I would never presume that such a thing is even possible, because it isn't. you could however succeed in convincing a newb to ape in with no actual idea what they are doing.
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Didn't use to be possible. It is now, however. Thanks to this one of a kind rabbit hole...
People need Bitcoin, and it's not tricking them when you tell the truth and are transparent about everything...
They get more than enough information to make a "get off zero" decision. I don't encourage them to go all in (I suggest 20 dollars to get started). Getting off zero is essential, as it will make them invested enough to care and want to learn more...
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bro, get a reality check
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Bitcoin is multidisciplinary and takes years to figure out, even if you have a solid IQ. Most won't ever figure it out any more than most don't ever figure out how their car or TV works. And they won't be maxis, they'll simply be users, and they won't use it unless it speaks the language of the masses: tap, swipe, click. This is why the Lightning Network is our best tool in my opinion, and the majority of people will interact with bitcoin using lightning, not L1. So it must be robust, built right.
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как же ты прав... слишком много информации нужно передать новичку в очень сжатом виде для его понимания. но есть и хороший вариант... через 5 лет люди могут разговаривать только о биткоине... везде... и все всё быстро поймут и разберуться... особенно если язык позволяет сократить слова но увеличить смысл сказанного на порядок. а вот как это будет язык покажет время...
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You don't need newbies to have deep understanding to get off zero, but they need to feel that there is an urgency, and that there are no better alternatives.
This rabbit hole does give them that, plus a solid overview...
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со временем есть тенденция что более молодое поколение понимает технологию лучше чем старик) Мы это понимаем... и поэтому вспереди на 15-25 лет... так что все нормально)))
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The idea of this page is to convince them in one sitting, and get them off zero...
Once they're in, they will probably start to study it more, and the page contains tons of sub rabbit holes they can explore...
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каждый выберет свое)))
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рынок покажет... нужное это или нет... биткоин безмолвен к этому... он просто скажет да навсегда или нет на вечно... ты поймешь)
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True. Wise words :)
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