**"A concept ? its jsut about my life."**

> > Fair. She's too clean. In real life she told me to shut up after forty seconds.

Still figuring out how to share this life without it reading like a punchline nor a joke & yeah, I'm always embarrassed. I just stopped showing it. That's probably the problem.

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RobertMust

I like the concept of this story. My only criticism is that I had trouble hearing g their voices. Maybe she was a little too confident? Maybe he was too idealistic? Or not embarrassed enough -- I'm always embarrassed to be preaching the orange word.

But I applaud the effort. Hope you keep it up. I like reading stories.

BooksAndArticles

I explain Bitcoin to hookers and dealers. This is that story. [PROLOGUE]

I like the concept of this story. My only criticism is that I had trouble hearing g their voices. Maybe she was a little too confident? Maybe he was too idealistic? Or not embarrassed enough -- I'm always embarrassed to be preaching the orange word. 

But I applaud the effort. Hope you keep it up. I like reading stories.