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Awesome and such a beautiful haiku.

(Is the last line a 5 syllable? - apologies if it is as my English isn’t great)

How would you read the last line? I read it as 5 syllables:

tir-ed smiles en-sue

I think an interesting thing about writing haikus is that I discover not everyone pronounces words the same way I do. And it’s humbling haha

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You are an educator so I very much stand in your shadow.

I read it as;
‘tired smiles en-sue’

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