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108 sats \ 2 replies \ @carlosfandango 21 Jan \ parent \ on: Stacker Saloon
Awesome and such a beautiful haiku.
(Is the last line a 5 syllable? - apologies if it is as my English isn’t great)
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21 sats \ 1 reply \ @cryotosensei 22 Jan
How would you read the last line? I read it as 5 syllables:
tir-ed smiles en-sue
I think an interesting thing about writing haikus is that I discover not everyone pronounces words the same way I do. And it’s humbling haha
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0 sats \ 0 replies \ @carlosfandango 22 Jan
You are an educator so I very much stand in your shadow.
I read it as; ‘tired smiles en-sue’
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