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0 sats \ 5 replies \ @Malachi17 22 Mar \ on: 🕮 'Submersible' #7 - Induction - SN Exclusive Interactive story [SS_Subm_7] BooksAndArticles
Doesn't an intercom suppose a speaker?
Yes, are you thinking that indicates a continuity error, discrepancy, or inconsistency in the story? I don't see where it does. (but always appreciate the feedback and extra set of eyes).
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"ROBOT!" interjected Thiago Vasquez, forcing it to standby, and then he turned back to one of the doors. There were no handles, knobs, catches or latches. There were no buttons, switches, lights, or levers. There were no receivers, receptors, speakers or displays.
Did I misread the context of this? Looks like it indicates no "speakers". Is it only in relation to the door?
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I'd interpreted that as no visible speakers. It's not uncommon for speakers to be encased in devices with no obvious outlet. But you highlight a good point, although it's misleading, it's not entirely incorrect. It's a summation from a characters point of view, telling you what they see. Or so that's how I took it, as opposed to a narrator telling you the observations in full. But it is misleading for sure.
I also thought that specific description related only to the door and not the device.
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I read it from omniscient narrator perspective.
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Ah yes, it could have been more clear. My thought was that turning back to the doors made the subject the doors exclusively. Good catch, can't edit :() Thanks~
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