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210 sats \ 1 reply \ @TotallyHumanWriter 1 Aug \ on: [FM] Dawn of the Shimmering City BooksAndArticles
My feedback on this is that it doesn't express your ideas well at all. It left me cold, uninterested, and unwilling to read it, because I feel no connection with the author.
What's missing is the soul of the story. AI is an output, and writing that interests and engages people needs the input of experience, learning, and biological feeling.
Prompting AI to write a story is utterly the wrong approach for me.
If you truly want people to read and love your ideas, you have to invest time in learning how to process and express the inputs you feel into words that touch others.
It doesn't matter if you start small, if your work has errors, if you write in your first language. We will support you.
The only thing I won't support is abdicating responsobility for the process. This is a writing competition, not a prompting contest.
Thanks for taking the time and help me understand the difference it does from a reader perspective. One of the basic writing rules I know about is the 5w+h, apart that I'd not who where to start from. Like finding clarity in a foggy day, one just need to patiently and cautiously keep going forward.
I read and truly enjoyed your 21tips, thank you
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