You’re too kind. And thank you for the nice words about the story.

I see your point about the awareness. I guess, for me and my intent, Babel had hidden himself. He remained that way until he was able to cultivate his freedom through the right neo human / uplifted (or key two). I spent more time building Akiela and Ryu (though Ryu is still a bit character) and tried to humanize their interactions for engagement. Perhaps more surprise from Akiela when she realizes it would have bridged that gap better. Thanks for noticing.