First comment!

I like the “expletive!” Shout haha The stream of shit in-game caught me by surprise

I was also surprised that the game starts as Patrick and Jessie, but then it switches to Kirk and Tim IRL

Reading your three stories in a row is interesting too going from female protagonists to male. Exploring the mind. Sasha was about exploring herself, her body, her personality.

These guys literally have no soul cartridge?

And of course here too it’s about the dancer and her body dancing alone it all being lonely

They’re so driven for this gold if they “win” that they don’t know what they’d do with it. Some big entity is supplying them beer?

The goal of the short story to me is to want to keep reading, or make you ask questions. VR Boys seems to accomplish that for me. I liked it!

FIRST COMMENT! See I support my fellow writers 🫡