So, I congratulate you, my friend, because you wrote the story very well and fluently, at least until this point it was good and everything was measured and thought out, when I started reading the post, the length of the post made me look at the post with my guard closed, but gradually I was attracted to the interesting world of the story and I read it with enthusiasm and curiosity until the last moment, and a sense of high suspense was created for me. And not only did it not bore me, but I also liked that I could read the rest of the story right away to understand what happens next, I hope you will post the next episode very soon and I will follow your page so that I will definitely watch the next episodes and not miss them,, good luck