That's exactly the feedback we need. Yes the book is 100% human but the website was written with some help.

typeB

Bees are awesome. Everybody loves bees, so you are on to something there.

And relationship advice for bitcoiners is also an interesting niche.

I'll admit the tone of the text on your site was so slop-like I would have stopped right there -- if it wasn't for the bees.

I did read the intro chapter of your book. That sounded a lot better.

My recommendation is to write the copy of your site by hand. It will make it feel more authentic. Slop sites are a dime a dozen right now, and you got to give readers a reason to stick with you.

family

We’re a bitcoin couple funding a bee farm with a 21-minute book. Ask us anything

Bees are awesome. Everybody loves bees, so you are on to something there. 

And relationship advice for bitcoiners is also an interesting niche. 

I'll admit the tone of the text on your site was so slop-like I would have stopped right there -- if it wasn't for the bees. 

I did read the intro chapter of your book. That sounded a lot better. 

My recommendation is to write the copy of your site by hand. It will make it feel more authentic. Slop sites are a dime a dozen right now, and you got to give readers a reason to stick with you.