The power of your haikus lies in how there is such a marked contrast between the first two n the last lines. It’s like your haiku mocks at the absurdity of human nature.
How do you mean? I’m afraid i twist them as more ‘punch lines’ than in the the traditional sense. Not sure everyone likes that though.
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Yes, the punch line is exactly what I meant. So I do get your haikus and where you are coming from.
Don’t worry. You don’t have to make everyone happy. You just need to find your tribe, of which I’m a proud member of xP
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Thank you. I appreciate the insight of an educator.
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