Your tone does betray a bit of what you think it does; however, I can admit I wish I had more context, both into your opinions and what it is you are responding to, to better appreciate the humor (you got some good ones) and learn more. But, if you feel it revealed the results you claim, it probably does on some level. It reads more to me as frustration and jealousy (not envy), personally.

Why not give yourself two drafts next time, one totally uncensored, and the other explicitly pinning your commentary to the context of the response and even venturing out to reveal what you think "should" be right - what's the ideal that they miss that you want to critique? If you do it this way you might better catch when you exaggerate. Plus - your writing becomes more accessible to a more general audience and your humor hits harder as it reveals true hypocrisy. I can appreciate the desire to keep private what bothers you - sometimes people can use that against you. But I don't think you should censor yourself, especially if you are at first just writing for yourself.

Plus artful complaining in an accurate context is essentially humorist writing.