Poems don't have to be sophisticated at all. In fact, those poems that are aware of themselves as poems never fit to my taste. I mean, many lines that are memorable are those that feel native to your own brain. I love familiarity in poetry.
Examples
  1. an old one You may have seen this one before. Maybe a bad example, as wheelbarrows and chickens are distant from us in the age of the computer. However, a clever poem such as this is successful at bringing an image to mind and projecting its meaning over it. Do you notice which lines point to the meaning of the wheelbarrow?
  2. a new one Sam Pink is an artist I've been following since I read his short story "The Ceremony". I think you know exactly what he means in this poem. It's not a head-scratcher, this one. Still, it has solemnity.
  3. from plebpoet Another poem from the collection I've been sharing. Just a series of genuine questions I had to put down on paper for clarity of mind, then clipped and shaped into the form a poem might have. The photos are from my phone. The female subject is a friend who would go get coffee with me and entertain answers to these questions.
There is a sensitivity and ... effortlessness to these poems that resonated. Thanks for sharing.
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questions over coffee slaps
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"Imagining they were flying off the Earth."
Yes, your right. People on dating apps are either professionals or so innocent that they both fly off the Earth for opposite reasons. (I did some absolute head scratching for this).
Poetry can have lot of meanings. This is mine.
Thanks! I love your poems. Keep posting them.
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This is curious to me, well here's how I interpret it. When using Tinder, for example, a small gesture of your thumb instantly removes the person presented to you as you judge their worthiness. He's saying this dating app makes him consider another's whole existence and then to cast it out. Qualifying "and it was all right" because the app was asking him to do exactly that.
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Haha I like the dating app one. Swiping people off the face of the earth. Clever.
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Bitcoin's volatility, A Dance Up and Down, The Market Carols Digital Gold, Bright Chance
Made some edits, but this was from Grok Regular mode. Pretty good for a first stab at the Haiku.
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