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72 sats \ 3 replies \ @TheWildHustle 3 Oct \ parent \ on: What are you working on this week? meta
I have a little bit more than this, I start going into her leaving work to go home and begin describing the city and environment she lives in.
I'm a super noob, and probably wont share drafts like this due to the embarrassment factor.
But its pretty interesting,
I wanted to come out with three short stories, each sort of mirroring characters in the wizard of oz. The first will mirror dorothy, the second would be the scarecrow and the third would be the wizard. The scarecrow would be the story of the good guy who won but then became evil, and the wizard would be the bad guy who lost and became good. Dorothy (Aria) will probably be the death athlete that dies for what she believes in.
Was playing around with comic book and manga stuff, but the short story route might be initially easier to throw out there. I've been making beat tapes and would have beats and artwork accompanying the storys, release them individually, and then Probably re-write them for better cohesion as one big story.
Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it. I think the protagonist’s interest in puzzles is intriguing. Indeed, why did she like it so much more than fiddling? It could be interesting if she used her passion in puzzles to set the fiddlers free or something.
Keep me updated!
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With the next 500 words (probably next chapter) I've just given myself more explaining to do.
Need to focus on answering some of these questions, or else I'll end up with a lot of unxeplained dead ends.
why did she like it so much more than fiddling?
I was going to lean on, (Humans like puzzles, and get bored by trivial nonsense)
Keep me updated!
Will do,
And thanks for the feedback
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Sounds exactly like the mundane fiat mining life!
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