55 sats \ 1 reply \ @plebpoet 19 Oct \ on: About the have my first cup of coffee in about 2 months food_and_drinks
Pay attention to your title, that's the one and only impression you get in the feed, man. Sharpen it up, come on, be your best. I'm seeing (1) "the" when you mean "to" and (2) using "about" twice to be imprecise with time. Just be precise, we'll enjoy reading it more. Like this: "Having my first cup of coffee", present tense, active.
Thanks for the comment. I'll sharpen it up for future posts.
I definitely should have caught (1). (2) I can probably improve on with practice ;)
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