The tension you express around your intention to stop using weed and the reality of still partaking reads as honest and unforced. It carries more weight because you allow yourself to be imperfect in public. That vulnerability is an essential ingredient in writing that resonates. Many self imposed promises falter because they are tied to an arbitrary moment like the start of the year. Your goblin’s skepticism toward this pattern feels like a subtle nudge toward a deeper sort of change, one that is not bound to the calendar but to a shift in mind and spirit.
There is also something refreshing in the way you write without a rigid agenda letting rhythm and loose association guide the piece. It helps the reader feel as if they are inhabiting your thought stream rather than standing at the end of a polished narrative. That proximity makes the intimacy stronger and the character richer.
The tension you express around your intention to stop using weed and the reality of still partaking reads as honest and unforced. It carries more weight because you allow yourself to be imperfect in public. That vulnerability is an essential ingredient in writing that resonates. Many self imposed promises falter because they are tied to an arbitrary moment like the start of the year. Your goblin’s skepticism toward this pattern feels like a subtle nudge toward a deeper sort of change, one that is not bound to the calendar but to a shift in mind and spirit.
There is also something refreshing in the way you write without a rigid agenda letting rhythm and loose association guide the piece. It helps the reader feel as if they are inhabiting your thought stream rather than standing at the end of a polished narrative. That proximity makes the intimacy stronger and the character richer.