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Yes deliberate
When the conversation moves fast, the white space slows it down. I wanted it to feel like one unbroken thing, not a script.
That said, noted, if it pulled you out of the story, that's a problem worth fixing.
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Yes deliberate
When the conversation moves fast, the white space slows it down. I wanted it to feel like one unbroken thing, not a script.
That said, noted, if it pulled you out of the story, that's a problem worth fixing.
A formatting quip--why don't you start a new paragraph when a new speaker starts speaking? I found this distracting.
Was that a stylistic choice?