You left "Anyone who cares about security and ownership should understand hardware wallets and how they give actual ownership and secure your Bitcoin." out.
  • How does it enable true ownership?
  • What makes it secure, how?
  • What are the standards that allow the wallet to be restored by virtually any other big name manufacturer?
  • Why Mnemonic? What's that? Pro's?
  • HD-wallets (the actual wallet), big one: how does it work, how are things generated and why?
  • What part plays entropy and bit-length in the security of the following Mnemonic?
That's off the top of my head...
I don't wanna be rude, really, but it's what makes you move forward; I've been "helped" like this numerous times, too.
Moreover, 20k sats for a shallow write-up? Someone had a good day.