Ah! See, as with anything, it's in the details. 

I should've pointed out what kind of audience I'm eyeing, thanks for the clarification, though.

you're fine for a more intermediate or advanced beginner. They already know the why, so my point is invalid there. 

When I say clear and concise I mean for a wider audience. Adding a couple of why statements earlier on opens up the content to some who will stop at paragraph one or two. 

Hope you found the discussion helpful. 

TNStacker

Starters, although I'm trying to portray a pretty complete and thorough picture from the get-go, which might make it more suitable for the already more advanced (knowledgeable) starter.

Fabs

bitcoin_beginners

Work-in-progress of my guide on financial sovereignty with Bitcoin.

The answer to why is who. Who is your audience? 

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