0 sats \ 6 replies \ @Fabs OP 10 Apr \ parent \ on: Work-in-progress of my guide on financial sovereignty with Bitcoin. bitcoin_beginners
Hm. I'll put some further thought towards the structuring, but honestly?
If a few minutes is already too long to get from the detailed "what" to the detailed "why", then it might not be the guide for you.
I'm not saying you're wrong, I simply don't see a way of improving the above as of now, and I kinda fail to see the bigger "why".
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0 sats \ 5 replies \ @TNStacker 10 Apr
The answer to why is who. Who is your audience?
All writers disagree with editors. All writers need editors.
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0 sats \ 4 replies \ @Fabs OP 10 Apr
Starters, although I'm trying to portray a pretty complete and thorough picture from the get-go, which might make it more suitable for the already more advanced (knowledgeable) starter.
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100 sats \ 3 replies \ @TNStacker 10 Apr
you're fine for a more intermediate or advanced beginner. They already know the why, so my point is invalid there.
When I say clear and concise I mean for a wider audience. Adding a couple of why statements earlier on opens up the content to some who will stop at paragraph one or two.
Hope you found the discussion helpful.
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21 sats \ 1 reply \ @Fabs OP 10 Apr
Can I @ you in the future?
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0 sats \ 0 replies \ @TNStacker 10 Apr
Of course!
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21 sats \ 0 replies \ @Fabs OP 10 Apr
Ah! See, as with anything, it's in the details.
I should've pointed out what kind of audience I'm eyeing, thanks for the clarification, though.
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