I am not saying this is not the case. I'm saying that in this paragraph, to my understanding, the author should advise the opposite : low outbound fee on the source channel, not a high one . It's the sink that should have a high inbound fee.
For the last part, i might have written too fast, indeed, the inbound discount on the sink channels is good
Low outbond fees will invite any channel to take that liquidity. So other sources will take it. If you want the high inbound discounts on sinks to have effect you need matching high outbound fees on sources.