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I just found a file named broken_universe.md on my computer, and I had completely forgotten that I created it. The filename sounded intriguing, so I opened it and started reading.
While reading it, I realized it contained notes for a universe I had been developing in my head at some point. These notes were meant as preparation for a (short) story set in that universe, which I may or may not write someday. But I think it didn’t really matter to me whether I ever would write a story using them. It was already fun just to imagine such a universe and think about how I could create an interesting storyline within it.
Anyway, rereading these forgotten notes was a pretty cool experience because I remembered that, at the time, I wasn’t sure if the idea was indeed interesting. But since I had completely forgotten writing them, I was able to read it as if someone else had written it—and it actually got me interested in that universe again. I wanted to read more.
So that's cool and that's why I am sharing them now. Maybe I'll indeed think about it more from time to time and add more notes.
# Fractures in Reality * reality may fracture at any time in any way at any place * examples for fractures: * coins always land on the same side now * everybody dies in the same way (age, accident, disease) * a portal to a new universe opens up like in _Rick and Morty_ * a journal of someone living after reality fractured * some people were born after reality started to fracture and thus don't know the "Old World" * journal helps that someone to stay sane and remember the old days * wonders if the fractures were a gift or a curse * human generations are named after the first fracture they experienced * fractures are harnessed after we have studied them * most don't care about the fractures but do enjoy the technological advancements they made possible """ Nobody noticed the first time the universe broke. It took a few weeks from the first reports to be believed. """
"Nobody noticed the first time the universe broke"
I did. A movie named Shazam with Sin Bad definitely happened, and the fact that there's no proof of that movie can only mean that reality fractured.
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I have literally had that same thought. And you might not realize it, but I am a person who uses 'literally' literally.
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51 sats \ 1 reply \ @ek OP 6 Jan
Maybe you are in a time loop and you will make that movie
I don't know how to make this time loop work though
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I hope I'm not in a time loop, because with my luck I'd probably be in one where I eternally witness my own death or something equally disturbing.
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Cool ideas, reminds me of some short story ideas I’ve had bumbling in my head for years. I need to work on getting those written down.
I used to write scripts for short films for fun, just fell out of it.
I’ll post the two I wrote while in college some time when I find them.
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Heh, I love how you take notes in markdown. Me too!
Sounds like a cool setup. Coins always landing on the same side sounds intriguing.
Everyone dying in the same way sounds cool at first, but will limit your storytelling range. Maybe the method of dying changes every day? And someone must be sacrificed at the start of the day to determine what that is, so that everyone else can guard against it. LOL, if you end up publishing this, make a note of thanks for my idea.
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30 sats \ 0 replies \ @ek OP 6 Jan
Everyone dying in the same way sounds cool at first, but will limit your storytelling range.
Yeah, thought so, too. But maybe there's a way to keep it interesting as you mentioned.
Btw, I think I was inspired by this movie which I didn't watch, only the summary and I will probably not watch it:
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This is a really rich seed of an idea -- do you write fiction? Whether you do or not, you should give it a shot.
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27 sats \ 0 replies \ @ek OP 6 Jan
do you write fiction?
I only remember writing some fiction for homework in school
Whether you do or not, you should give it a shot.
Thank you, let's see 👀
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48 sats \ 0 replies \ @nichro 6 Jan
Interesting concept for a writing prompt (for those who knew about that subreddit)
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Wow, this sounds like an amazing concept! The idea of a fractured reality.You should definitely revisit and expand on it; this universe feels like it has so much potential to explore!
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10 sats \ 1 reply \ @nym 6 Jan
Could be an epic epic.
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Yeah, I agree.
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28 sats \ 0 replies \ @nym 6 Jan
Reads like Asiminov. One of my favs
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